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Submitted: April 25, 2008
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My first portrait/person/human painting. :lol:

Constructive criticism welcomed!

Thanks to ~NikxStock for the stock image.
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I'm really liking the stylised look you went with Shant, they way you emphasised certain lines makes her figure pop out... The only criticism I'd have is that the orange glow on her nose/forehead is a little too strong, if it was slightly thinner or had a slight fade towards the edges where it meets the face it would be less distracting and it wouldn't make the nose look big.

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wow mna, you did really well, wish i could paint this well :(

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I love how you intensify certain parts of the painting. The only thing I could point out is the fingers on the cigarette. I think it ended up somewhat awkward. The index finger seemed too fat and the pinky is somewhat out of shape, like its rubber.(?)
I have no critiques for you! D: It's just way too good!

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Love the style and the outlines wan yayayayayayayayayyayayaya :-A

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Yeah, I noticed that too. Thanks for the heads up! :)
Thanks man. :aww:
I'm sure you could paint well! Give it a shot sometime. I'd like to see the end result. :lol:
damn dude, this kicks a great deal of ass.
Maybe its because of the lack of shading up there. :bucktooth:

Thanks though, I appreciate that!

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